Friday, October 7, 2011

My Thesis

Here Mitt Romney strives to help us Americans notice how our unemployment rate is so low. By so doing this he hopes we elect  him as the next president. In so doing this he talks to all people. The wealthy businessman, the average Joe, and the poor man. With some bold statements and changes that he will do once he becomes the next president.


  1. Simple, yet refined, I like it. Sounds like it was a good choice to do your rhetorical analysis on.

  2. This sounds like it has great potential, but I don't exactly get a clear idea of what tools he specifically implements to persuade his reader.